Paper Bag Critique
Sound- making a song or soundscape using sounds gathered from the different bags
Justin
- Metamorphosis
- alien
- heart
- explosion
- fireworks (you could set fireworks off inside it so that they explode out the front hole and the top)
- don’t mess it up
- fighting with yourself
- practicing failure and mistakes
- trying to fix
- juxtaposition
- damage/perfection
- sighing
- release
- make a series – suture, broken, etc.
- achievement can hold you back
- flapping pieces (movement/kinetic)
- restriction
- exposure therapy
- still very controlled in the breaking
- controlled destruction
- continued pressure behind the break
Dale
- elements of shape, colour, texture
- squished
- smushed
- negative space
- stepped on
- dilapidated
- abandoned
- distressed
- rough texture
- collapsed form
- what if you: shot it, hit it with a car, ran over it, dump paint over it, drop in the river
- hatred
- what if it was human scale (the mesh version) like massive
- discarded
- garbage
- shelter
Lumi
- spew
- expression
- colour exploration
- clouds
- open on both ends
- happenstance
- covered holes with cotton
- jagged
- paint mixing
- multimedia
- tree frog
- leftovers
- flailing on the ground
- water-soluble veggies (idk why I wrote this I don’t remember)
- Joseph and the technicolor dream coat
- chameleon
- additive
- maximalist
Catherine
- build it out of cake and icing?
- build out of wax/make into a functioning candle
- make it really big and stand inside it
- curvacious
- stronger to hold more weight
- texture – laid down accentuates that
- tea bag
Angelika
- Holy Mary
- graffitied
- weathered
- banal beauty
- slumped
- draped
- used and abused
- de-valued look
- reptilian
- contrast
- hollow
- intuitive
- fabric
- add more mediums (maybe make it into a diorama)
- put up on Forbidden Plateau with the other graffiti walls up there
- kids climbing structure
Avery
- tumbling
- cracked
- smushed
- hole- little guy living inside it
- old greek sculpture
- shedding
- wiggles
- movement
- architecture
- not gentle
- shed through the space to leave a trail
- finding out what we’re made of
- escape
- layers and histories
- bandaids
- jawbreaker
- if it was painted like 50s wallpaper
- shaking
Faye
- thick
- chunky
- use the bag long enough it becomes weathered
- handled delicately
- intention to use it again
- crunkled
- sanded to the bone
- Faye should be a bag designer
- closed on the top – can’t see in
- sides rest on itself (independent)
- time-based + temporal (decay over time and use)
- looking closely
- compartmentalizing
- grounded through movement
- packing lists
- back and forth
- travel
- bringing out detail
- gesture by changing shadows and light
- decay
- melt
- soggy
- practicality
- transportable via another bag
???
- useless – make into something useful
- can’t see to the bottom
- performance – push over to each side over and over again
- puzzle
- rubik’s cube
- stackable
- minimalism (the death of artistic expression)
- dominoes
- knock over
- projection
- interactive digital sensors
- sensory
Acacia
- Imply
- top-heavy form
- thick base
- very smooth
- squish
- lit from underneath?
- corset
- strangled gently
- presented with a plaster hand around it
- sharp fold lines
- 2000s yoga pants waist band
- looks carved
- strong gesture
- implication
- action that something has been recently done to the form, like this shape just happened
- tension
- attach lines to each corner and pull through to create the form
- hourglass
- dropping and liftin
- quiet
- a moment
Maya
- memory
- hot lunch
- paper look
- details
- creases
- crunchy
- closed form
- hear wire inside
- looks like tears something inside
- contrast
- unfinished
- mysterious
- sensory
- anticipation
- don’t remember whats in it
- realism
- sharp
- burlap
- fabric
- solid pieces
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